Author's note: This is the first chapter of the book, so that's why it doesn't really have an ending. There will be more chapters!
Escape
The wind wafted
across the warm summer air and brought the delightful smell of cherry blossoms and lavender to my nose. I took in everything.
The smell, the view, the grass, the sky, everything. I couldn't believe after all the years I've lived in a
world where you never knew if there was going to be a tomorrow, I'd finally found the one and only
place where could feel happy. It was
almost as if I was a princess.
That was until I
looked down and saw my brown and white, tattered clothes that I'd been wearing
for at least a month without being
washed. I never wanted to go back to my homeland, my province called Falafia. Falafia was a terrible place where
our rulers, which we call Falafails, controlled everything we did. No one had ever broken the rules,
knowing there are serious consequences like torture and death, until I came along. I just couldn't take it
anymore. Living everyday wishing I could
just be free. Now I am though and I
don't regret it at all, and I'm going to tell you exactly how I got here.
I sprinted down the
cold, hard, rocky gravel road with nothing but skin on my feet. Though how my
day was going, I didn't know if there
was going to be skin by the end of the day. Actually I didn't know if there even is going to be a me. The
Falagaurds have been chasing me for at least three miles now and I didn't know if they were ever going to stop.
It was almost as if they were robots. Keeping a consistent pace the whole time and never running out of
breath, doesn't seem right to me.
I turned around and
saw them gaining on me knowing that I couldn't keep it up much longer and I
kept going back to how I got into this
situation in the first place. It all started a couple days ago when I woke up at crack of dawn and grabbed everything I needed
to run away; food, water, a first-aid kit, some coins that my great grandmother gave to me when I was
six, and last, but definitely not least, the locket my parents gave to me on my first birthday. I
packed everything into the backpack I found in my parent's closet and went to the kitchen write a note
to my parents. I grabbed the dark black pen off the counter and found a white napkin to write on in the
kitchen.
I brushed my dirty
blonde hair out of my face and started writing:
Dear Mom and Dad,
I'm sorry. I'm
sorry for leaving you after everything you've given and done for me. It's
just…. I can't take it anymore. I can't
take living life with no control over anything. I can't take living with no control over anything. I can't live the life
that I know I'm not supposed to be living. I just can't. This is the first decision I've ever made in my
life, but I know it's the right one. I'm going to miss you more than anything else in the world, but I
know I have to go. So, goodbye Mom. I'm going to miss your smile and the way you could always make
me laugh no matter what happened. Goodbye Dad.
I'm going to miss you piggybacking me around the house when I get a
bruise on my leg and when you play board
games with me when I'm sick. I am saying goodbye to the best parents in the
world, so don't let yourself think it
was something you did. Nothing you ever did to me has to do with any of this. I love you.
Love,
Layla
I crisply folded the
napkin into a perfect little square and set it in the exact center of my
kitchen table. Then I realized that my
hiking boot was untied, so I leaned over and tied it. Right at that moment I
really figured out what I was doing. I
wasn't just running away, I was leaving everything I'd ever known. I was leaving my family, the only people I'd ever
loved and pretty much the only people I'd ever known besides the Falafails and the people who
lived right next door to us. That's when I started to cry, so I rolled up onto a tiny little ball on the floor.
I cried and cried in the exact same spot on the floor for about an hour or so. That's when I realized that
there was no way I could continue crying.
I had to leave, and
I had to leave now. Sitting on the floor crying was the biggest mistake I'd
ever made. By now the Falagaurds were
all up and starting the first part of their shift and my parents would be home
in about an hour. I had to be really sneaky and swift with what I do now. I got
up off the cold floor and pulled myself together. I looked around my house one
more time, knowing I would never see it
again. After I finished memorizing every nook and cranny of my house, and
walked out my front door, slowly shutting it behind me making sure not to cause
a ruckus.
I really love the story! The letter was really well written! The only thing I saw was in the 4th sentence 1st paragraph I think you meant where I could instead of where could. But otherwise I like how it leaves that suspenseful feel. Really want to find out what happens! Good job and hilarious names!
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